tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10282376.post6672777102920597408..comments2024-03-25T20:45:50.003-05:00Comments on CrimeFictionWriter: Feel free to write crap? No. Never.Michael Brackenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01072019804281421944noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10282376.post-72911116012173381142013-06-30T17:08:02.620-05:002013-06-30T17:08:02.620-05:00Too often at conferences and conventions, and in h...Too often at conferences and conventions, and in how-to-write articles and blog posts, writers repeat certain truisms that have had all the truth distilled out of them or which directly contradict my experience.<br /><br />"Feel free to write crap" is one of those truisms.<br /><br />The kind of in-depth discussions Charles alludes to, wherein a more experienced writer takes the time to explain to a less experienced writer the value of rough drafts and how, as Manuel suggests, second drafts can resolve problems that crop up in first drafts, are far more valuable to a beginning writer than spouting truisms from on high.Michael Brackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01072019804281421944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10282376.post-49660297834873747522013-06-30T10:29:11.695-05:002013-06-30T10:29:11.695-05:00Michael, I always took that bit of advice to mean ...Michael, I always took that bit of advice to mean "Don't worry much about style in the first draft." If the premise, characters, and plot don't work, it's truly crap and thus a goner, but if those are worthwhile, I use the second draft to try and get the style right; to find the right narrative voice for the piece.<br /><br />The final draft is the live patient on the table. The rough draft is the cadaver I do early work on in my personal medical school. (Come to think of it, surgery is a more apt metaphor for editing than for composition. Sculpting might be a better analogy: rough clay form showing the basic compositional shape, then a carefully-shaped refinement, and finally polished bronze.)<br /><br />Great blog, by the way. I'm currently making my first attempt since 1976 at a novel, and appreciate any advice I can get. I particularly liked your entry "Show your work". Reminds me of James MacDonald's description of a writing technique he likens to "positional chess".Manuel Royalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392229225958688128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10282376.post-47962949090533278442013-06-30T09:56:13.581-05:002013-06-30T09:56:13.581-05:00I never tell people to write crap on purpose. I do...I never tell people to write crap on purpose. I do tell them, when they're starting out, not to worry too soon about trying to make it perfect. That rough drafts are for their eyes only and no one else has to see the crap.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com