Yesterday Carol Kilgore discussed repetitious sentence construction in her blog post "Wake Up Your Writing" at UnderTheTikiHut.blogspot.com. Earlier today I replied with an example and then realized I'd unintentionally written a bit of flash fiction.
Here it is:
She went to the store. She bought eggs. She bought rat poison. She went home. She prepared her husband's breakfast.
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I still love this, even reading it the second time. Even if all the sentences are alike.
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