I had to cut this from a WIP because it just didn't fit. But it was fun to write.
“Watch, Mom.” Tommy put a plastic dinosaur in a toy convertible and pushed it across the room. When the car hit the wall, he said, “Tyrannosaurus wrecks!”
I love that sentence! I find that the sentences I think are the best always wind up cut out of the story. I guess its one of those "kill your darlings" scenarios. It could make a great opening sentence to another story though, but of course, you knew that.
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I love that sentence! I find that the sentences I think are the best always wind up cut out of the story. I guess its one of those "kill your darlings" scenarios. It could make a great opening sentence to another story though, but of course, you knew that.
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